I have three New Year’s Resolution.
The first resolution is ‘Practice Red Box Project’. Red Box Project will be second my life plan. The first my life plan is Black Box Project which I executed for the middle school and high school period. Now I will face the University life. That is new life style. Then I need to make new plan which is suitable for new life. That's why l make Red Box Project. Red is symbol of passion. But now I regret I would have broke black box project. Not any more I want to make repentance. So I do my best to practice red box project.
The second resolution is searching a good girl friend. I will be graduated from Gwangju highschool. There are only boy student. So I have no chance of meeting girl. But now I will meet many girls. While I meet many girls, I find suitable girl friend who can make me happy and passionate. I really want to fall in love with a nice girl.
The Last resolution is taking siwon’s class of English conversation well. I will try to speak English harder to have confidence of speaking in English. So I really want for siwon to feel worth lecturing me. I’d like to get along with everyone in this class, hopefully.
That's all. Thanks.
1. Practice Red Box Project.
2. Search A Good Girl Friend.
3. Perfectly study Siwon’s Lecture.
The first resolution is ‘Practice Red Box Project’. Red Box Project will be second my life plan. The first my life plan is Black Box Project which I executed for the middle school and high school period. Now I will face the University life. That is new life style. Then I need to make new plan which is suitable for new life. That's why l make Red Box Project. Red is symbol of passion. But now I regret I would have broke black box project. Not any more I want to make repentance. So I do my best to practice red box project.
The second resolution is searching a good girl friend. I will be graduated from Gwangju highschool. There are only boy student. So I have no chance of meeting girl. But now I will meet many girls. While I meet many girls, I find suitable girl friend who can make me happy and passionate. I really want to fall in love with a nice girl.
The Last resolution is taking siwon’s class of English conversation well. I will try to speak English harder to have confidence of speaking in English. So I really want for siwon to feel worth lecturing me. I’d like to get along with everyone in this class, hopefully.
That's all. Thanks.
1. Practice Red Box Project.
2. Search A Good Girl Friend.
3. Perfectly study Siwon’s Lecture.
몇군데 틀렸다 싶은 것, 골라봤다.
second my life plan 틀린 표현인것 같음. life를 두개의 형용사가 수식하는 꼴이 되어버림.
second를 명사로 보고 second of my plan 이렇게는 쓸 수 있을 것 같은데..
Now I will face the University life. now와 will이 한문장 안에 있는 것 어색함.
I need to make new plan is suitable new life. 절이 아닌 이상 동사는 원형 is->be
서술적 용법의 형용사 다음에 이와 상관없는 명사가 나오네. 부사처리 해야지. suitable 다음에 for 쓰고
While I meet many girls, I find suitable girl friend who can make me happy and passionate.
지금 적합한 여자얘를 찾아버린건 아니잖아. 주절의 시제가 잘못된 것 같아.
앞으로도 열씸히 쓰길 바래. 계속 봐주지.. ㅋㅋ